I mean, i love the style of this game. The scary animations, the VHS stuff and stuff like that. The imagery was awesome i guess.
The game though, i really like gameplay in games. Or a story, anything that can entertain, even scare sometimes. But here you just click letters and form sentences.. Just some creepy cutscenes (As long as i remember, i have played it 2 months ago). It isn't that intresting, i don't say it should be, but you definitely have a lot of potential, looking at it itself. I would recommend you to make it not just scary, but intresting.
Oh, just noticed. Hey Selfish Dream, i didn't knew you made this game. I know you by your youtube videos. They are pretty cool, i like it.
You could totally improve, i know you and your personality from your videos. You absolutely can make something interesting, just try, and you can do it.